Glory

 

Glory

Glory

Glory

Glory

 

The eye of the moon

Black and full of wonder

See him stare at his wife

Looking deep into her molten heart

See him glow with heat from the back

Of his ancient mind

Once they were enemies

But now they are married in a sacred, forever dance

Of drifting peace and circling divorce

Until they move into the deepest reaches of the dark space

Of the unknown

But to them they know what lies ahead

Because they've been through the bombardment of hate and love

In the beginning there was nothing

Then there was light....

 

Glory

Glory

Glory

Glory

  

 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

love the set up of this on the page the marriage of dark and light this is a beautiful poem.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow... this is new and fresh .. unique indeed..
it all works together to paint a beginning
And to express the "Glory" of it all....

Wow .......... Jasmine

[Blue]

Whew. This took my breath away... Beautiful and refreshingly unique. I like the theme, too. You are smart.

[Frieda P]

An intriguing view of love's cycles, Emma Joy sent me your way, glad she did. Like your unique style here, well pen'd.

[Ezra Kaossed]

Well thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed reading it! :D

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine :-)

[Praveeta]

I like the representation of sun as the husband and moon as the wife and the relationship similar to that of couples.

[icelandicblue]

The myth of the sun and the moon coupled within the dance of life. It was a joy to read your poem.

[Sami Khalil]

Glory title and a glorious write...Pen on...:).........

[emmajoy]

' But now they are married in a sacred, forever dance ~ Of drifting peace and circling divorce ..' You have quite a unique way of looking at the familiar.. and here start and end on your own imaginative and glorious path.. clever!

[Ezra Kaossed]

Thank you for your kind words it really makes me happy that someone actually reads my poetry. So thanks again. It means a lot. :)