Chaos

A Poem by FD.

Chaos

It rises inside

And feeds itself

Get rid of it

As it seems to swell

So you have to stand strong

But the human mind

Will push you down

And drown your strength

You will lose

The treasures you thought

You’ve found after battle

The problem is

The battle is still on

And it will go on into eternity

Slowly consuming you

© 2012 FD.

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TLK

Nice, repetitive, almost lapping rhythm to it.
The only problem is "you've find", which should be "you've found" (but you know that. It was just a typo).

Is Chaos another name for entropy, here? I do not know, either, if we can win the fight against entropy. Or even if it is a fight that should be fought, let alone won at all.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

Thanks for telling! I've changed it.

I think you quite understand what I mean with this.. read more

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TLK

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks for telling! I've changed it.

I think you quite understand what I mean with this.. read more

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Added on September 3, 2012
Last Updated on September 13, 2012
Tags: chaos, franky, dalle

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FD.

Utopia, Belgium

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Everybody creates an own vision of reality. Those visions are unique. Poetry is my way of expressing myself, my vision. If you'd like to get to know my vision, you can read my poetry and my blog.. more..

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