‘If I Could I Would’

‘If I Could I Would’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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We live we live we learn🌹

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‘If I Could ...I Would ‘

If I could remove the pain I would and change all the tears if I could rearrange the words I know that I should have but the fact remains that all said and done and we can’t go back to where we began....if I could heal the doubt renew the trust replace lost love return the rays of the sun where our story had begun ...when the hands of time stood still ...49 roses as if destiny chose us ...then the hour glass shattered for things that did not matter ...but in every season there is a reason ....and love shall bloom again ...hearts they mend...forgiveness transcends....but we cannot pretend that the truth is a long lost friend....hearts entwined until the end of time 🌹

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
20/01/2021

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I really love this write, this is wonderful

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

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Love this! So relatable! Love the impromptu/spontaneous feel of it, unvarnished.

Chris Martin of Coldplay does a tribute to George Michael at Brit Awards 2017:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iPoKzxTS80g

This song has the lyric: "If I could, I would" . . . and it moves me deeply every time I hear it. Your ourpouring has a similar effect, moving me to the depths (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

Blessings for you and I trust all is well with you 🙏🌹🙏
' .. f I could remove the pain I would and change all the tears if I could rearrange the words I know that I should have but.. ;

How many people could say the same but.. few could express them as you do here, dear Kelly.

Such sadness.. yet beautiful words. Life, both positive and negative shoots straight and hurts, but, scars can heal over time, hearts quieten, and comes a now ago, gone. And someone, named Kelly teaches the world how to be.. human and heroic. Hugs and blessings, as ever always.

Posted 3 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

Ahhh bless you precious soul, trusting all is well with you and yours and sending much love and bles.. read more
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

Thank you - one can never have too many kindnesses
So hope you're taking great care of yourse.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

Blessings in abundance and may the good Lord keep you and shelter you under His wings 🙏❤️🙏
Very beautiful....hearts entwined until the end of time...love blooms again and always.

Posted 3 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

Yes but times we need to see the pain we ourselves have caused and learn in order to overcome 🌹Th.. read more
dearest Kelly... loved shared is never lost... it remains
forever in the embers of romance and the dance with
desire to soothe the coldness of being alone when the Moon
and stars are aligned for healing and sharing. tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

Beautiful are these words of wisdom ...Thankyou 🌹🌹🌹
I agree dear Kelly.
"but in every season there is a reason ....and love shall bloom again ...hearts they mend...forgiveness transcends....but we cannot pretend that the truth is a long lost friend....hearts entwined until the end of time "
We must find our proper place and be content. Seek enough and know peace. Thank you for sharing the amazing and positive poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

Truth you speak all at right time 🌹
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Hello dear Kelly and good evening from Michigan.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Years Ago

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