True Love

True Love

A Poem by astoundinglyattractive

love is thrown around
way to often
love should mean the world
but the meaning has been forgotten
 have heard love stories
told by many
yet it seems that only i can see
that none are true
it seems that only i
know the definition
love means
total devotion
love means fear and hate
if you are truly in love
then you will always feel the pain
but only if it is true love
it is fear that you will lose them
and hating yourself
for being afraid
it is anger as well
at those you feel
come between you and them
it can never be true love
without jealousy
because of the fear
that you will lose them
this is the definition
of true love
the real definition
the one that is true
after saying this,
i want you to know,
that i love you.

© 2010 astoundinglyattractive


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I love this poem. :) It really strikes my heart and makes me think. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


You know the truths of love... I really cant pick my favorite part... i love it all. You are truly insightful, lovely write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is good, and even helped me with a book that I'm writing about this. Very inspirational and well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really good. Um, talk about crying while I read this. I think we can all relate. Or, at least the one's that have experiences this type of love. The true love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are correct on this well explained. love it from the beginning to the end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Again, I love the fact that there's no puncuation, except this one I found a tad hard to read without it. But that's just my personal thoughts. Great poem though, beautifully written :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...I just blinked and a tear rolled down my cheek. o.o I think it's just my awful cold. >.> I think your poem is really moving and I spoke to me. Thanks.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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