everytime

everytime i see you

its like i lose my breath (or do i catch it?)

its like i lose all knowledge (or maybe i learn it all)

its like i lose my depth (or maybe i becfome deeper)

and everytime i see you

i feel i fall in debt (or am i paying it off?)

how much do i owe you,

for all the looks i get?

 

the word love does not work here (it never will for me)

i completely deny all uses

love is a scary thing for me,

all the times i've been betrayed- (for there have been many)

its hard to admit, but i am afraid.

 

not the fact,

but the meaning-

and not really the meaning,

the result- (how it ends)

and its not actually the result,

its the causes-

buts its not even that...

its me. (i have alot of problems)

 

everytime i look at you

its like i almost die (or i become more alive)

its like i almost fly (i lose my angles wings)

its like i almost fall (i pick myself back up)

and everytime i see you

it all is made so clear (right through the fog)

i realize i am falling,

i need someone to catch me. (you?)

 

I am at a loss for words (or maybe not so much)

i am definatly hiding something (but what?)

and is it just my imagination,

that everytime you look at me

you seem... lighter, happy (its probably make believe)

 

its not realy that im broken-

im just shattered...

its not really that im lost-

its just my peices are scattered. (broken, shatteered, lost pieces scattered)

i sure hope you will be okay (it wont hatppen today)

when she breaks your little heart- (it really is quite fragile)

your being played, but you see...

i love like you too much to break the news...

 

Everytime i see you,

i fall even more in lo like.

but love like is dangerous

and don't know if i'll survive.

((pity me if i am the fool,

the one who will waste a very good life

over something silly like love like))

Reviews

[Call Me Blu]

I know whatcha mean. Can't really say anymore other than I enjoyed it.

[Jeremy Baker]

You have a musical quality and style to your writing which makes for a great read - loved it!

[Larry Dyson]

hmmm would make great song lyrics..don't you think?

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

i like this poem. it's deep, and emotionaly. It was a fabulous poem!! Great job!!!