That Carefree Simple Gesture

My attempt at ryming poetry. Derp.

It’s your love that keeps me going,
And your smile keeps me straight.
It’s that carefree simple gesture
That saves me from my fate.
It’s that whisper in the wind
That makes me stop and wait,
And the pretty summer breeze
That I appreciate.
It’s a silent sound of nothing
That came just a little late
It’s the darkest morning ever
And the sunrise it creates.
It’s happiness in life
That burns me at the stake
For the tears that come from truth
Are the reason why I came.
It’s your love that keeps me going, 
And your smile keeps me straight.
It’s that carefree simple gesture
That saves me from my fate.

Author's Note

So, ik my ryming poetry is kinda choppy, but i'm working on it.
Also, i wanna make a new account- one for my more serious work.. my better stuff/ newer stuff.... and also a novel i'm working on, one i actually plan on finishing.
I don't want to be cluttered with old stuff...
so should i?

Reviews

[Reaper]

very lovely

[Sylvana]

Yaaay, a lovely poem. ^-^
and duude, just make a new account if you really want to.
With love...