My Sonnet

You eyes glisten like the rain or the snow.

Your smile, as beautiful as natures beauty itself.

Your love, I cherish as if it were my child.

Your heart, I will never break.

You are mine, You always will be.

Your mind holds all you know, all you have.

I wish to know what happens in your head,

And then to help you through life.

Your words, I could listen to them forever, never letting you stop talking.

Telling me all you know and care about.

Your life, I want to be in it forever,

Never leaving you as I am yours.

And my love for you stronger than the angel of the heavens,

As you are the Angel of my heart.

Author's Note

this might not actually be a sonnet but oh well :P
My first try :3 xx

Reviews

[Ben Taylor]

"Your mind holds all you know, all you have."
That was the only line that didn't seem to flow well with the rest of the poem, but that's just my opinion.
I think this was really well done :)
Very nice :)

[Skoo.]

N'aww, I love you too (:
Just kiddin' d:

This is awesome, Jennyy (:
It's all romantic and "n'aww" (:

How do ya write sonnets? I've forgotten but I want to do one d: xx