The road of ink

I'm on a roll,

No stopping me now.

I hit some bumps,

But I don't know how

To get out of this place

Of darkness and despair,

Where words don't exist,

No how, why or where.

 

I see the light,

I race to the door,

The words come back

I can write some more.

Smoothly driving,

My pen runs out of ink,

I start to panic,

My heart starts to sink.

 

I move on from one,

Useless, no care.

Go on to another,

It will take me there.

Back on the road,

The white, lined sheets,

Back on the road,

Where I'm destined to be.

 

Reviews

[Mk.t.g]

"Back on the road,
The white, lined sheets,
Back on the road,
Where I'm destined to be."
Wonderful and powerful lines, Jenny! This is such a nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Indeed, we all plan our own escape from this world, to live in peace with ourselves!
Mk.t.g

[Lowesy]

very nice

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Strong use of ryhme on a hell of a poem
your a hell of a poet my friend and this write shows just how gifted you are cheers and stay crazy Gonzo

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Writing is a great form of therapy... I like the whole feel of finding good through the bad.

[Jeremy Baker]

There is a great flow and energy to this poem. You write with intensity and passion - love it!

[EmeraldFacet]

The words stream very nicely. I really enjoyed the honesty and simplicity of the poem as well.

Good work : )

[Kyle]

Well done!

[Orlando Murcia]

Great job sweetheart....


Orlando

[Alexis]

What a fantastic poem! I love how you wove all the words together. It flowed very nicely! I agree with the previous review; I also enjoy poems where you go from darkness to light. You did a wonderful job in desribing poetically what it's like to suddenly be way off track, but to soon come back. Great job!!

[Silence]

I always like poetry about, "roads," or going from the dark to the light :). Excellent job!

[White Ink]

we all lose track sometimes.. but sooner or later we gotta get back.. lovely :)