Fate

Fate

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

I think I have a problem,

No matter what I do,

My mind is filled

To the top

With images of you.

 

Your eyes that change

From blue to green,

depending on the light,

I think about you through the day

And sometimes through the night.

 

I first saw you

And I just thought 'wow'

Never thought I'd see you again

A second time, A proper meet..

Would this be fate then?

 

 

 

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


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Left me wanting to hear more. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this one flows nicely as I read it, and it makes me wonder about chance encounters. Very enjoyable

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sounds like fate.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I actually really enjoyed this. The rhyming works really well. Nice content, I can't say much else. I like it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fate is bittersweet. It can put you with the person you were meant to be with or it can take that person away. I love the first verse " I think I have a problem no matter what I do, my mind is filled to the top with images of you. " I enjoyed reading this piece. Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fate can trick us and test us. I have met people in airports lost in time. Sometime impossible mean just need more luck and better timing. A positive poem with some hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww, I love the ending. the uncertainty that so badly wants to turn itself into hope but is afraid of hurt. I can relate to that a lot as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a very nice write. I thought it was really cute. I think you did a very nice job. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh, wow! very sweet! :))

Posted 13 Years Ago



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FaithfullyJennyBear
FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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