In assumption

Everytime I see you cry,

deep inside I want to die.

I always ask myself why

all you do to me is lie.

Always thinking 'no, oh my'

letting out a casual sigh.

Peices of my heart I will tie

'til I wish you a goodbye.

I thought you were a decent guy

when I first turned to say hi.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I couldn't help it. You write beautifully!! I had to write in a poem form, it seems....

"Because a child of love,
as how I see you,
bedight in radiance
of violet hues,
plays my heart in flips;
not everyone might see this!
Where a giving hand
presents itself
to an unworthy man,
dreams and needs
seed to fill the empty void;
your heart finds mine,
and your love's employed!
That scented breeze
that dismisses a rue guise,
brings to you
my words and truth
to further that smile
of yours
before THIS one dies!"

xoxox -Your Mark ....any day

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Aww, wow this is beautiful man :D thank you for appreciating my words :3

[Fenner]

I really liked that poem. Well done, short, sweet and powerful. :)