You're the cause.

The flowers are dead.

My heart put to bed.

Get out of my head.

My eyes are all red.

I gnoring what he said.

The feelings he led.

The heartbreak he spread.

Like butter on bread.

He used to be my ted.

My heart was never fed.

And now I need med.

Because of you.

You left too soon.

I love you too?

It's just not cool.

My feelings go 'boo'.

What can I do?

My heart needs glue.

Broken in two.

Left for who?

Unable to fix.

My emotions all mixed.

Put together like sticks.

Pushed over for kicks.

My heart he picks?

My love her nicks.

Each second it ticks.

 

No time...

              No love...

                            No care...

Reviews

[StarSandwich]

I like this it flows and the rhyming fads in some places but in others its good.. The start is amazing :)

[Maimai]

Hmmm, not so sure on the rhymes there... but good poem, keep writing :)

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a sweet poem, although mixing up the rhyme pattern may give it a little more gravitas. But I liked it!