My love for you..

Even though

you'e miles away

I still feel your touch

and see your cute gaze

I see a picture

I read a text

my stomach flutters

and my heart's the net

when you're near me

I can't help but stare

you're simply handsome

and you're also rare.

The way you smile

the way you walk

just makes me think

and then we talk

I'm smilng away

no one else exists

just me and you

as the time ticks

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Description of a good love where distance cannot stop the emotion. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[lifesmith]

unfortunately I've never been able to do this...absence doesn't make my heart grow fonder, but I certainly love to read about it

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very simple and straightforward, very unambiguous. I like it.

[M.Babu]

"I see a picture
I read a text
my stomach flutters
and my heart's the net"

loved this particular bit...one of the best i've read today. The tone really fits the type of writing...cute and adorable:)

~M.Babu~

[Jeremy Baker]

There's something about falling in love which is so enticing - great work!

[roy mccarthy]

young love!
such a nice poem!

[Lily Mae]

The trills of being in love.. :) xx Beautifully expressed..x

[Eve]

I've read a lot of love poems before but so far I like this one the best. Its very relateble(is this even how you spell it?) Good joy.