Thy Kingdom Come

Newest poem. Wrote it yesterday

 

The leaves has fallen

The stone patriarch is lost

We have all but forgotten

As I breathe in the last summer frost

 

Thy kingdom come

 

The stick up the a*s is the first step

The penetrating sensation of pain is the second

When you become older, it will be infested with society’s cobweb

The rules have been kept I reckon

 

In between these sheets, I am king

And in this, my monroeic kingdom

I’ve lost all but my ability to sing

But I’ll sing as I await my Elysium

 

Thy kingdom come

 

As I sit blatantly ignoring myself

My kingdom has fallen apart

Collapsed like a stone ice shelf

All without mercy toward my heart

 

But let the bards sing of their days

In their own oblivion

I have seen it all in many ways

All with a psychotically blurry vision

All the hearts shall stop

As the rage I hold will explode

They shall be thrown to wolves as I drop

From my throne in utter dismay, it will not bode

Well for any single person in my court

For I will have them hell fucked from now till the end of times

As I command every single male escort

To skullfuck all of my simplistic subjects for their crimes

 

The anger burning through my pages

Leaves traces of sorrow

It has stung for ages

Even though I never thought of tomorrow.

 

Thy monroeic kingdom come

 

For I decree that blood shall shower over the lands

As we cut the hands

From every thief to ever touch the princess

They shall never again be fearless

 

It is always darkest just before you fall

Every king should know this better than all

Author's Note

Gimme your best.

Reviews

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

The scintillating feeling is well expressed, starts off with a chill and descends into a really harsh volatile anger. There is a waiting, not deplored but that of scheming, orretribution. You just wait! What a fall it will be.

[RubyOmma]

I would say the leaves have fallen or the leaf has fallen. It's good, If I may offer a comment I don't like the word monroeic. It's takes away from the power of the ending. Just Thy kingdom come is enough. I would also take out for in the line beneath and just say I decree. Those are my thoughts. Thanks it is really good, and I can feel it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good journey in your words.
"It is always darkest just before you fall
Every king should know this better than all"
A good king know when to prepare for success or his world falling apart. Good to see your name on the board. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dayran]

Certainly not the kingdom of the child ... but the grown up child who can't get a date. My comments came ... I'm sure ...