The Fallen, The Lost, The Lonely And The Sufferer

I feel like I’m standing here..

No support at all..

Nothing but My Heroine..

This is all to much.. 

I dug out to much truth.. 

The unbearable truth..

Nothing but the real truth about me..

The Fallen Hero..

The Lost..

The Lonely..

The Sufferer..

But never the victim..

Yeah that’s how I really feel..

I should reside in darkness..

Nothing else than that..

True Darkness..

The Darkness of Heart..

The Darkness of Mind..

The Darkness in everything..

The Darkness in myself..

I should be cast from this civilization..

I should be granted one chance to die..

I should just fall towards the ground.. 

And be the most ground breaking person you’ll ever see..

I should be thrown out of all the bullshit.. 

All the hate and social distortion..

I’m so depressed..

But I can’t seem to find myself..

I have no right to be here..

I need no justice to see you..

For now..

I’ll just keep on living like..

The Fallen Hero..

The Lost..

The Lonely..

The Sufferer..

Author's Note

Honest opinion..

Reviews

[Brook Hughes]

This is an awesome poem and I have to admit it is one of my favorites. I can relate a little to this poem. I really enjoyed this part: But never the victim..
Yeah that’s how I really feel..
I should reside in darkness..
Nothing else than that..
True Darkness..


The Darkness of Heart..
The Darkness of Mind..
The Darkness in everything..
The Darkness in myself..

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can be fair and a pain in the a*s. Strong people get stronger and hope for a better place and good luck. A strong poem. Sometime we can't win. We must dig deep to find something good in our life. A excellent poem. You made me think again.
Coyote

A great poem Fallen. This was very strong, one of your most powerful pieces.
It's sad though, the falling feeling to it. Don't let it get you down, keep on going! You're strong and I know you can do it! Message me if you want to talk ever.
Great poem, it really told a story!

[A]

This one is really good!
It creates a whole atmosphere for the reader, we feel those feelings emitted from your words, the flow is excellent, I would like to point out that at the beginning maybe " to much " you mean by it ( too much.)
deep and powerful piece, well-done.

[Cynthia]

I love it, I really do. The flow is really good, and you captured the emotions well! I agree, this poem taste like falling down, and the lost, the confusion is there, I enjoy reading your poem, cause readers can always relate to them.
Nice Job!

[ShaneBerry]

The flow of this Poem has a falling feeling. as i read this i felt like i was falling into the black abyss that the subject of this poem is obviously feeling.
certain parts felt like it would echoe, "The fallen Hero...
The Lost..
The Lonely
The sufferer.."
echoed in my ears as i read it.
the only grammatical issues i could find were punctuation, you would constantly use ".." the punctuation you should have used should have been a series of three periods "..." or a comma ","
but that is just my opinion, over all a deep very strong and depressed write!