The Unknown..

Lost the innovation..

All for this complication..

I know not who I am..

You see me for what I did..

I can’t keep this goddamn face up..

The chin pounded to the ground.. 

Again, again, again..

I take it lying down..

I have no f*****g need to get up..

I will continue lying here..

Forever..

Lost the innovation..

All for this complication..

I know not who I am..

You know me for what I did..

A sudden push to the back makes me drop..

I look for who it was..

I look left..

I look right..

I look alone..

And I stop..

I see myself for what I really am.. 

I don’t get myself..

No one does..

I will be alone..

Forever..

Lost the innovation..

For this complication..

I know not who I am..

You kiss me for what I did..

I know not who I really am..

Am I just ordinary..

Am I The Unknown Soldier.

Am I A Fallen Hero.

Or have I just lost my mind?

A Fallen Hero - The Unknown..

Written : 06/03/2011

Dedication : Nobody who'd care

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. We are pulled in many directions. Disappointment and walls of B.S leave us pissed off with no place to go. We need to focus on the good things. Hope must be somewhere. Even if it must be words on a sheet of paper. I like the ending. I ask myself the same questions many times. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[fallen.angel.]

I really liked this poem~!!
'I look left.. I look right.. I look alone'
I love the image that creates~!!
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Great poem here. The words, language, structure was very strong!! You could really feel the pain behind it, you sound pretty troubled.
I like the idea of "the unknown soldier" it fits in well with "a fallen hero". It's hard not knowing who you are, but you are a great person, get in touch with your soul!! You haven't strayed to far yet.
Great stuff!