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Standing around isn’t going to help..

But there’s not much else I can do..

You tore me apart..

Lying..

Laughing..

And I thought it’d be me who’d f**k it up..

But let’s be

Clear about

All this..

You mean

So

Much to

Me

That’s why it hurts so bad..

But I’ll never let it get to me..

That’s what you think anyway..

You could’ve fucked him and I wouldn’t care..

I don’t want to care..

You say I’m special and I actually try to believe you..

Yet I’m the a*****e here..

But it’s not about me anymore..

But yeah..

It’s your problem what we do from here on out I’d guess..

Because I’ve got no f*****g idea..

Author's Note

Honest opinion...

Reviews

[Meghan]

Very nice! Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing.

[natzky]

acceptance dude...hehe...anyway its a nice poem...

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. Pain and anger is strong in your words. Easy to mess up. Hard to forgive. Sometime life give us chances to break even in karma. Good people know what is real and what is not. A powerful poem with emotion and question. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Black]

untitled fits i guess,
change some words,
so the flow gets better,
further a sad story, which is full of pain

[Namelezz]

I know I lied. I know I am so stupid. Yet, I'm only human and probably not the most perfect of my kind.
You are special. You mean the f*****g world to me.
I swear that the day you leave me... I'll probably become a monster towards myself.
But for now... I love you

[stars are far]

this was well done
you did a great work :)

[Dayran]

Knowing that you don't know is a good place to start. It tells another that the world is a bigger place than what all of us thought. Virtue may be classified into two types. Where it is in an unmindful state, it serves to apply our attention to all there is. Where it is attributed to sexual fidelity, it serves to apply ourselves to the human condition. A hero would champion the virtue of his lady, no matter what the storms say. Where she notices such devotion and realizes herself unworthy, she'll redirect your devotion to another who is nobler. Your poem is a potency of all these possibilities.

[Tainted Devotion]

Very well done and love the raw emotions here. Very nice. Keep it up.

[donny ingraham]

nicely written with strong emotions in it