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Stopping to Listen, I'm Not Sure I Like What I Heard. (God is history and so will I)

Stopping to Listen, I'm Not Sure I Like What I Heard. (God is history and so will I)

A Poem by Ian Lundin

The afterlife is just a memory
This fury that resides inside of me
Waiting patiently to be unleashed
Message of the great eternity
Procrastination's just a symptom of the greater hesitation
That boat is leaving and I'm left with this sinking feeling
Thinking maybe it's this whole damn boat that's sinking
Letting go just to hold on to my sanity
Without internal momentum we all fall to gravity
I can't get it all to fit inside my mind
Sacrifices must be made in the great charade
Listen intently to the cannonade
Concussion and repercussion
Nothing is without cause and we all have an effect
Centralized or globalized
Who will remember?

© 2009 Ian Lundin


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This was a thought provoking poem. You had me hanging on to your every word. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Ian Lundin
Ian Lundin

South Lake Tahoe, CA



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