Cherry On Top

Shape Poetry at it's best!

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A
Banana Cream Pie,
or a banana split. Isn’t 
complete, without this bit.
A Cherry on Top for all to see,
the sweetest of the entire treat.

Ice Cream, whipped cream
fruity flavors abound,
But none can compare
to the one that's round.
So make that shake,
and that sundae treat.
Top it off with that 
luscious sweet
Cherry on Top
the best one
yet. The one
sweetest 
for you 
to get
!

Reviews

[knightcall]

another coolio structure

[Bailey C. Writing]

Haha, this was so cute. :) It made me want a banana split, mmm...it's a perfect little summer poem and you're right- the cherry on the top is so necessary. Just makes it all complete!
Good job, haha :)

[John Fakler]

I want ice cream now and yes with a cherry on top they just make a good thing better great poem and one I can relate with

[Spade]

This is so kawaii. It makes me think of other cute and sweet things, like kittens and gumdrops.

[TM "Ree" Tate]

oh wow this is cute, nicely written!! :D

[Helpless]

super cute! love it!

[Raven Starhawk]

Genius. You have composed a real image filled masterpiece.

[FallenWingz]

this is realy great..i do miss her though.....

[Peggy Gildon]

Oh I just noticed it's in the shape of an ice cream cone. With a cherry on top. What a beautiful work of art in both ways. Incredible tribute to that Cherry on top.. I always eat that first. Amazing write.

[Poetic-Theorem]

Marvelous Shape (concrete) poetry, the content matches the shape wonderfully and deliciouly. Me wanting a yummy treat now. Excellent work. *hug* David