Your Star

Yet another song.

I can't see your star

I can't see your star

Though I'm patiently waiting bedside for the death of today

The mechanical lights of Libson frightened away

I can't see your star

I can't see your star

And I'm alone now

Me and all I stood for

We're wandering now

All in parts and pieces

Find your own way out

I can't see your star

I can't see your star

How can the darkness feel so good?

And I'm alone now

Me and all I stood for

We're wndering now

All and parts and pieces Find your own way out

All my fears turn to rage

Why can't you hear me

Calling your name

Can't break the silence 

It's breaking me

And I'm alone now 

Me and all I stood for 

We're wandering now

All in parts and pieces

Find your own way out

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Wow I would love to here this as a song. I think it's a very promising one. With the right tune and the right instrument, you'd make it into a really slashing piece of art.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Ruth]

An acoustic maybe!?:)
Lovely prose type piece as well, touching read!
xx