Way To Live

A Poem describes the little Positive way to live our life..

By with you live,
One day you'll give,
Don't ever blame our life,
Its beautifull when we smile,

Don't wait for others,
Get out of the Dark,
Take some courage,
you'll find a brighten spark,

Spark is enough,
To Come out of bad,
Live in the Light,
One day you'll be Glad.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammer mistakes

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

It's a very encouraging and positive poem. Thank you for sharing :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Tahnk you saher😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Spark is enough,
To Come out of bad,
Live in the Light,
One day you'll be Glad. "
I liked the above line and the positive feel of the poetry. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank tou😊😊...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[bibin Sebastian]

nice ans short. good rhyme scheme and meaningful as well. good attempt

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thnx Alot😊 Thnx for visiting

[bela]

I love this inspirational poem. I like the way your wrote this.
Keep up good work.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thnk u so much😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Don't try to force to rhyme.. Write it as it comes.. If the meaning is clear it will be good.. There aren't much grammar mistakes as much as there are tenses mistakes.. Also the first line of your poem has no clear meaning...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Got it👍..i'll definatley overcome with my mistakes..thnx for reading btw

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh you are welcome☺

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Well written!! Well conveyed!!
My advice would be to use more poetic devices to enhance it's sound...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you, for visiting..i'll definately consider on ur advice