GoodBye Said The Tree

Poem is about the nature...now adays accross the world loads of trees are been chopped..poem describe a guy who fancy the nature..

One Day I Came Downstairs,
I Found a Baby plant onmy Desk,
I pitched it on the Earth,
God made it Shower on its Birth.

Surrounded by Vicious Creature,
God Must save his Beautiful Nature,
I grew up by lookin its falling Leafs,
Never thought it will give people,
Griefs.

No mercy, no they don't care nor
they fear,
What Would i do i was burst
Into tears,
Don't Cut! Don't Cut! I said Don't
Make a mess,
How Could they be so, arrogant and merciless.

Author's Note

Our Nature seems in Danger..Poem is describing how much a man can love the nature....poem has something to feel, something to make others understand what does it mean..

Reviews

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People chopping down trees and occurring destruction of nature doesn't love their life at all....well if they had...wouldn't had touch even a leaf to tear.....And we nature loving people are so selfish no?! Trying hard to our very hard just to save tree and to inhale O2 molecules to save ourselves...
The pain and agony expressed at the last of the poem is something to feel on....thanks for sharing....Indeed a good read!

[Najam Us Saher]

Very heart touching poem. I loved it. Time has come where each one of us has to realise the conservation of nature.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, thank you saher😊

[I Am Svetlana]

I've always hated the fact that people cut trees down & how many get cut each year. I love the beauty of trees & how simple, yet complex they are. They symbolize growth & new life. Beautiful write!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Ma'am..your review means alott to me😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poem speak the truth. No respect for Nature. Funny part is. We need her more than she need us. Food, water and air. Gifts, she give to us. A powerful poem with meaning. I liked this poem.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Red Rose]

Man ur just 17! Good job considering the fact that English is not ur native language.
Keep writing.. Inshallah you will become an expert!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanx alott..in shaa allah...and thanx for ur visit..😊

[Red Rose]

No problem dude.

[The dark story]

A very ravishing poem with an important message to the human world. Just strike off the grammatical errors and it is perfect :) thanks for sharing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank yoi very much Atiba..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The message and theme here are good enough.. You could finetune it by overcoming the grammar mistakes which is causing the lack of flow.. Otherwise it's good...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank u for ur review...As of My Grammer soon i'll make it perfect soon..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's nice.. You are welcome ☺

[bela]

Wonderful poem! packed with message.
My favorite lines:

Surrounded by Vicious Creature,
God Must save his Beautiful Nature,
I grew up by lookin its falling Leafs,
Never thought it will give people,
Griefs.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much😊

[Tazeen Ahmed]

The message here is beautifully expressed by a kind of prose... Well written!!!
It could have been better if you would implement some grammatical mistakes ---
Spellings
It should be" beautiful "
Make - made
....
Etc

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yea i am working on.my grammer😁...soon i'll fix it

[Tazeen Ahmed]

That sounds positive :)