Dream Girl

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

Bit of romantic words

My Dream girl. I know we never met before, But everytime I see you, my heart falls on the floor.

My Dream girl. I know we never talked before, But every moves of your lips, makes heart beat faster though.

My Dream girl. There's nothing more beautiful than you, but everytime I think of you, my face put a smile in flow.

My Dream girl. My heart beats only for you, Even when we're apart, My hearts says endless I Love You.

© 2017 Farhan Shaikh

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Lovecraft

A loving and tenderly written poem about the girl of your dreams, yo r true love, a soul mate. It's quite good, though there are a few grammatical errors in the second, third and fourth lines. Clean that up a bit and it would be even better.

I know that I can be critical in regards to your spelling/grammar, but I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism so this poem is easily understandable and more beautiful in its wording.

Good job though! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

thanx vfor your polite adice..i vwill vdefinately look into it..btw thak you so much for assesment.... read more

Surya

Even my heart says endless "I love you"....haha .Thank you Farhan for sharing..:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

thnkss for yer visit..

Jes' Pi

The poem is romantic and you are good at describing!
Very good:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Thank you atashusi😊

Coyote Poetry

Those dream girls can be dangerous. I liked the woman who can make me laugh and have long conversations. I liked the way you used the description. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote