When She Departed

May be you're thinking

I still love you, Let me know you that I don't.

Want me to care? Well, I won't.

May be you're thinking

I'm still holding on to something.

May be you're thinking I'll come back to you, but I ain't ever.

Letting me down,

you left me alone forever.

I was sorry for my mistake,

Begged for the second chance,

Ignoring me on the street, you didn't let your mercy enhance.

I followed you like a dog for the bone,

you kicked me down and left me all alone.

May be one day you'll realize you should've give me second chance, and now you won't be able to see the glimpse of my glans.

Reviews

[Surya]

If something doesnt come back to you then it's not your cup of tea, hopefully you learnt something from her, never do that again....enjiy even sadness of your lives, any how it's life rite.....
And coming to your write, it is a feeling and a letter more than a poem....both ways it was good..

[Farhan Shaikh]

You are right Surya, ability to write something came after she left...love can be the reason for converting a dumb last bencher into a great writer

[CAPOLAVORO]

Haha. Sometimes when trust is something that can never be fixed again. I get your side as a guy but I understand why the other side don't want to care for you anymore. Well done on this one.

[Farhan Shaikh]

You are right, each one got hurt, btw thank you

[Najam Us Saher]

Don't use such harsh words on yourself. Mostly a true person that likes someone gets hurt by other. This poem shows your rage through your words I can feel it. Very well written. I hope you overcome these thoughts and trust me one day someone else will thank her for letting you go. That will be the one you truly deserve.

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's very kind saher 😊 I remember not to mention thanx😁

[Najam Us Saher]

That's good. 😀