I Said To Her..

I Said girl,

Please don't let my love go in vain. Let me love you again, It's only you in my heart & brain.

I Said girl,

You're the only one I love, Never put anyone above, It is lovely thing to fall in love.

I Said girl,

Can you please erase my mistakes, Celebrate my birthday together Holding my hand and cutting my cake.

I Said girl,

I really really miss you a lot, I think about you at every plot, You asked me to forgive you! But No! I cannot.

I Said girl,

Surely I deserve a second chance, Once again to hold your waist and dance, I'm gonna take you to a date in France.

I Said girl,

It was my past & I ask you to forgive, take me in your heart where I'll live, I was a fool so please forgive.

I Said girl,

I'm sorry I misunderstood you, I really should've taken care of you, You still love me?, please give me a clue.

I Said girl,

I really miss your smile at me, I really want you to ride for life with me, I can be we and now I'm on my knee.

I Said girl,

I don't know where you are but I hope we'll meet, because I really am missing our conversations and our tweet.

I Said girl,

I'm still in your love, and I'll never move on, it doesn't matter how far you have gone, I still believe that you'll take me in your arms again, and help recover my pain

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of thoughts. I liked the ending. Accepting someone after a struggle. This is love. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Luna]

it was just like a song going up and down, showing so many emotions. Really this could actually become a good song. Nice one Farhan :) keep up the hard work

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Luna🙂

[Abhishek Asthana]

straightway you wanted to narrate what exactly you have gone through...nice one...i enjoyed...keep writing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much Abhishek

[Mel Jayne]

Cool writing. You might want to check some of the grammar so that it makes a bit more sense. It's a sweet insight into love and very human emotions.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Mel Jayne for a kind review..I'll check it

[CAPOLAVORO]

What did she said about what you said which ended in words being said? Lol, anyways, I know you could create such romantic piece. You are good in this one. Keep writing Farhan. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so Much😉

[Zephyr]

Great! You can really be a wonderful creative writer!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ohh! It motivates me a lot..thanks for your kind words

[mercy party]

The words read with sweet sincerity.
I would say this to you my friend, and i've always appreciated your work, moving on is the greatest act of love. This is my take on the topic you so perfectly presented. You are a true poet and there is a great big world outside waiting to be dug into! keep on keeping on

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much..it means a lot..really

[Karisha Nove]

I love your poem... it's simple and pure. Pure love. ♡♡♡

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank
You😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i have always said and will say it again and again....
do you have magical powers??
because you got another magical poem!!!
farhan.....this is the cutest one among all your writes...and once again you have left a magical feel!!wow..wow..wow

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! I don't know if I have magical powers ..but I love magic😉.
And thank you for your kind review it means alot and motivate me alot

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahahh....you do have magical powers..(laughs)
keep writing..

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hehe thank you

[matrixmark]

A touching and hearfelt piece.

So much yearning is involved in losing someone, and you engaged the reader with your words.

Mark.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much mark

[matrixmark]

Welcome.

Mark.