Seems Like I Want To Die

"Life at some point seems so meaningless, even if U have everything. It just feels that way"

Seems Like I Want To Die

I found darkness in the light,

what I'm most afraid of, is the happiness' height

Since things seems to change very quick

Happiness followed by sadness, so sick

Life too has mood swings,

sometimes happiness, other times sadness it brings

At some point life seems so meaningless

Not a thing is constant, life is an immense guess

In our veins darkness spread,

we swallow our dreams like a piece of bread

Life seems so unfair,

it get us in trouble, yet no one to care

For their own purpose everyone is here,

no one is yours, I swear

At some point, they'll leave you

No one can bear it in your shoe

I can breathe, I can feel

But broken heart can never be healed

Even if for life I try,

life appears so unfair, seems like I just want to die

Author's Note

This is just a DARK piece I wrote. Some random feelings. Hope U'll enjoy!

Reviews

[Angela Sparks]

I love this piece:) one does tend to find themselves in between the light and the dark. Life making it seem as though no side is quite right. Stuck on the fence, and soon one starts titling over to the dark side and is lost in the feelings of suicide. I loved the dark tone to it. The feelings you gave made me. Shiver. ^.^ an AMAZING poem. Every forward and truthful

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah you are absolutely right.
I am very GLAD you liked it.
Your review means A lot to me :)
Thanks once AGAIN :*:*:* (XOXO)

[Angela Sparks]

No problem ^.^ thank you for writing!

[Cara]

I can breathe, I can feel
But broken heart can never be healed

amazing, i can only say that this poem is amazing, and it is true, and i sometimes feel exactly this way and no words could explain how i fell, but this one does, thank you for sharing, this one goes to my favorites i sure wanna read it a gain.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot for this AMAZING compliment :* You know I too felt like this many times but I couldn't find a way to write my exact feelings but now I wrote t down finally. Thanks A lot sweetie! ^_^

[Cara]

no thank you for this poem, because when your sad and you read it, it kinda gives you hope XD

[Lady Lola]

Quite dark, but true. We all feel like that sometimes. You gave those feelings a lovely form!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe :D Yeah U are right, we all do! Thanks A lot for Ur kind words:*:*:*

[Pushkar Prabhat]

life almost never seems fare.......why is that? maybe it is not supposed to be........
death can only end things....... but nothing will resolve.........
maybe its a game.......treasure hunt of sorts........ hunting for happiness while enduring sadness........
beautifully rhymed......
i liked it!!!
:)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh Yup U are right! Thanks A lot for an AMAZING Review. I really really appreciate it^_^

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I can relate, to the never healing broken heart. Very well done :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aw THANK YOU so much! These were just some random feelings from last night!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Any time :)