Imagine it

A quick write from of the top

Can you imagine
Being left out in the cold
Broken down
For so long
Your heart withers
Your body stiffens
Breathe is cold
Can you imagine
As the story goes on
Life seems to get better
Winter turns into that nice spring weather
Can you imagine
Finding your bond like atom
With her life seems better
Can you imagine
Seeing her
Every sun and moon
Pulling you close
Like gravity
You can't escape
Even if you can
Can you imagine
Her telling calling you a man
From a boy you stood
To a man you stand
Can you imagine
Her leaving
World dying
Heart bleeding
And you begging
Can you imagine
True love
Can you imagine
For better or worse
Can you

Reviews

[The Crow]

This was pretty cool. I felt like some parts were worded a bit strangely, but I suppose that's just poetic license. Quick question, in the part involving "bond like atom", is there supposed to be an illusion? I wasn't particularly sure, but I got a Garden of Eden vibe from it. Anyway, good work, I want to see more in the future.

[Afro father]

Thanks and yea my poems usually have a weird flow lol....the bond like atom I read somewhere (might be a little wrong lol ) but the person said that some people are drawn to each other like atoms because our atoms was close by to each other...thought it was cool and nerdy....oh and I love your profile pic lol one of my favorite YouTube videos lol