One and one quarter

A basic romantic poem expressing how I feel about a new love

Two brownies
One for each of us
He eats half of his
And waits for me to finish mine
Then splits the rest of his with me
Aaron.

Author's Note

I'm not trying to be fancy...lol

Reviews

[BThomvanWart]

Can I say that this is rather cute? Like, I wish I had those "in the moment" feelings about my past relationships because perhaps they wouldn't have become past relationships, haha. Very nice, and it tells a story that's much longer than the poem itself and I think that's the best part.