Losing You.

 

 

 

Losing You.

Perhaps ours was not a usual love,
the sort that demands continual proof,
fervour which naught can cool or drown,
the fierce passion that willingly lays down
its needs for another's approval, no our own
affection was something written in lighter tone.

Ours had the keenness of separate
beings enjoying share of time together,
reaching for comfort found hand in hand
when trouble meant need of understanding,
yes our connection led us to friendship's corner,
where choice was honoured and respect afforded.

Yet love was there,
it grew with care
of each for each,
so in losing you
death, of a sort
took me too.

Reviews

[Karmee]

Such an emotional read really, this is well written and presented

[Fay Slimm]

Many thanks for your visit and generous review. Am pleased you related to "Losing You."

[Neville]

This is everything that the Bunny & TF have already said about it Fay... Yes, without a shadow of a doubt, fine words indeed and will surely resonate with many of those who find themselves here... I know they do with me and truly... Stay safe n well my friend...

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Glad I caught your kind remarks of something not easy to write Nev....... I miss reviews sometimes but do apologize - - thank you very muchly amigo-
- am shutting up shop now - - and wishing you pleasant dreams

[Robert Trakofler]

LOL my last poem "ring" was very much about this subject cept I like yours better:/ the emotions you penned were very palpable lament dear Fay Im so sorry for your pain:(

[Fay Slimm]

Your warm and compassionate review does my work such honour - - thank you many times my dear poet-friend for your visit and read.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and powerful piece, one takes the hand of those in pain, weakened by it's existence and never knowing when to let go, well done, great read.

[Fay Slimm]

Great to know you found value in my few words on handling loss of someone who was more than a friend - - - thank you Thomas for your visit and perceptive review.