Princess turned Rogue

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Here's a description of my story :

Just as things are panning out for Alicia in the society of thieves, she must leave it and her friend Eesso behind in order to help her kingdom. Alicia is sent to a religious center in the heart of the woods in Vohndurma--a kingdom that keeps to itself. All is not lost like Alicia originally thought. Prince Royden whisks her back to his kingdom, Rockford, where she becomes betrothed to Royden and falls in love with a noble named Chetwyn. Then when she realizes the world of Zivmundis is in peril, she, Royden, and Chetwyn embark on a journey to find the only thing that can help them: the land of Caezaylis- a land they aren't certain exists. On their way they run into a boy and his grandfather....read my book if you want to find out what happens!