Word Vomit

Word Vomit

A Poem by Rachel Hays
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I may elaborate on this later. It's really not anything. Just something that hit me while I was feeling blue. It's under poems because that's the only thing I could think to put it under. It's not in anyway a completed work. That's the first thing that hi

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Love is an unhealing wound.
Though it is deep and screams in pain and protest,
It longs for a means to mend it.

© 2008 Rachel Hays


Author's Note

Rachel Hays
Just a little word vomit in a not-feeling-so-well mood.

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Its different. I would love to see what else could go with it, though. It feels...too short for me, I want more. :)
Do elaborate. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


while the poem is nice i enjoyed the description of the poem much better.

i may elaborate on this later.
it's really not anything.
just something that hit me while i was feeling blue.

i believe that is the true poem. it's concise and mysterious, and opens up a myriad of possible explanations. perhaps even cut out the "blue" part on the end so it will just end with "feeling", illustrating to the reader how seldom anyone feels anything.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Rachel Hays
Rachel Hays

Gallatin, TN



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Well, I grew up very fast. I dealt with feelings of immense rage, depression, and a plethora of other emotions. I found a niche in writing. It helped to put down in paper my fantasies, feelings, and t.. more..

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