Hole in the ground

Hole in the ground

A Poem by Feniks

I've started to dig
Just a hole in the park
I'm going to dig
Untill it's all dark

The longer I dig
The more that I think
The deeper my thoughts
The deeper I sink

I haven't realized
The depth of my pit
I'm deeper in the ground
Than I'd like to admit

So I look all aorund
And think with a sigh
I can't get back
The walls are too high

So I just sit down
And think of a plan
Then I start to shout
"help if you can!"

A few hours pass
And I'm still in the ground
I stand and I scream
But there's no one around

It's starting to rain
Water's pouring down
So I sit here to think
I'm gonna drown

The longer I sit
The worse that it grows
I'm going mad
As my hole overflows

I scream and I scream
My throat becomes sore
So I scream the last thing
"I can't take it anymore!"

Then I wake up
And it all was a dream
I'm lying in the sand
That was washed downstream

My clothes are all wet
And I stumble around
Walk far enough
To find a hole in the ground

Too deep and too dark
And I can't see the floor
I hear someone screaming
"I can't take it anymore"

29 July 2016

© 2016 Feniks


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I am completely and utterly in love with this! Wonderful!

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