Perfectly Amazing

Perfectly Amazing

A Poem by Poetic Tuesday
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Don't ever forget what you are to me, love.

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You're nothing short of perfectly amazing.

Eyes like windows to your soul, a tragic story
Waiting for someone to come along and erase the hurt
And re-write laughter and happiness in its place.
Let me be the hero; your protagonist.

A smile so sweet and beautiful, despite the lies
Because it's only a mask so the world can't see who you are
But don't you think a pain-free smile would be so much better?
I want to make you smile something real.

A voice more melodic than any old love song
Reciting the same lines all the time, but I know you mean it
Then you tell me you're fine when I know you're not.
But I must admit, it always sounds so gorgeous.

A heart that beats to the song in your head and bleeds ink
To write the words of our story along your veins
I know you don't always feel perfect, honey.
The little flaws make you so perfect to me.

I know it's hard, and sometimes you want to give up
All I ask is that you don't, it's only a countdown of days
Until we can be together, unbreakable, happy.
And I can finally make you feel beautiful.

© 2011 Poetic Tuesday


Author's Note

Poetic Tuesday
Written for my best friend. She's so amazing, but she doesn't even realize it, and it's really heartbreaking.

Reviews/constructive criticism are appreciated. C:

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That's very sweet Blaze. It's clear how heart-felt it is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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