Don't Let Me Go

Don't Let Me Go

A Poem by FictionAsVeneer
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Hopefully it's all in the words. It all came from the heart!

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Wanted castrated, tonight I'm hated
Anything she's sayin' is probably over exaggerated
On the phone, she's at home
Called me back to tell me to leave her the f**k alone
Dreams we were chasing feel so wasted
Wish I could rewind it back to when this was basic
Did you ring to tell me the same thing?
Every night blamed, didn't you do the same thing?
Now you call me m**********r, I call you b***h
Much of which consists of I the culprit
Thought maybe, baby, we could re-stock the trust
But you know what happened to thought, it wanted to f**k
I throw it on my status that I can't manage
Might aswell show 'n tell I'm a little savage
Over you, and your new dude,
Just heard the news, f**k you, too
But I still love you, uh
...I really do

Don't you let me go.

Let me go, out in the snow
Out in the cold, s**t's gettin' old
We're over n now n I'm gettin stoned
So blind now that I'm on my own
Mh, really thought it could be perfect
Every conversation seemingly worthless
S**t ain't worth it, baby, you can work it
Let's talk when some real feelings finally surface
Weeks waiting testin my patience
Moving on to make something make sense
All these stations remindin me of you, I hate them
Call me down, maybe I'll feel gracious
You don't give a s**t cause you need a face lift
Hope you're happy kissin on a f*g's lip
You play the blame game, shame I do the same
I wish you'd call like the days you were my babe
So I can rage like you probably do with what's his name
Don't let me go, abuse me more, I'll embrace the pain

At times I got physical, if you saw it through my visuals
You'd know I got so emotional because I felt so invisible
Breaking up became ritual, because trust was fictional
One thing's true, I'll always miss you though

Don't let me go tonight.

© 2012 FictionAsVeneer


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Good writing; sounds like a great rap number.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes, we need to allow it flight, to see where it will go! I really enjoyed this piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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FictionAsVeneer
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Buffalo Narrows, The northern wilderness of Canada, Canada



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Hey! My name is Blayke and I'm a small town boy from the wilderness of northern Saskatchewan. I enjoying reading, writing and listening to music. I've been writing poetry, lyrics, short stories, scrip.. more..

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