ABLAZE

In this poem I am telling how do I feel about all my pain what I have inside! I don't know if it is right but I blame my parents.

ABLAZE

1.      I can’t see my own tears

Fire is too warm

All flames are drying them out

Want to know why

I have tried bee good boy

Still it all was not enough

I tried made you be

Proud of all my work

But you want gold bars

 

2.      Can you see my point here

You made me feel

I fell so pointless here

You never respect me

Never respected

All my choices in life

So I lost my hopes

 

3.     That’s why we are separating

That’s why I don’t want to talk

You always thought you know what is best for me

How you could know that what is right and what is wrong

I can’t see my own tears

Fire is too warm

 

Refrain:            My life is in ablaze

                        From all my pain

                        Want to freeze it

                        And run away

                        I guess it was my mistake

                        I couldn’t turn back on you

                        My life is in ablaze

                        From all my pain

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar problems! If you like this poem please writte comment!

Reviews

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OK. I will ignore grammar problems as you have requested but I do recommend that you get some help with this. I understand it may be difficult for you to write in English, so I applaud you for doing so well. I do like the general feel of this and its lyrical quality.