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Tear Me Up

Tear Me Up

A Poem by Fire&Rayne

Been beaten and whipped, 

My soul is stripped, 

Bare, before your eyes, 

You can see through the lies, 

Through the hate and the pain,

All that drove me insane.


I am broken and battered, 

My heart's been shattered. 

Bloodied and torn, 

I crave a new dawn, 

The virginal light, 

That ends the night. 


I am bruised and crushed, 

My hopes turned to dust, 

Like the dust from the grave, 

From the one you can't save, 

So look at what you've done, 

As I bleed in the sun. 


I have nothing left in my soul, 

It's just a black, jagged hole, 

In what was my life, 

So hand me that knife, 

I'll cut it out of my heart, 

The heart that tore me apart. 

© 2011 Fire&Rayne

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Wow, such a graphic and sad write. Amazing flow and rhyme acheme. I can feel the whole in the heart, well done....xo

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Added on August 21, 2011
Last Updated on August 21, 2011



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I had an account, got bored of it, this is my new one. more..