Now. Right Now.

Spur of the moment poem. I feel the middle needs improving...

The past means nothing

The future is untold

Its now that I care about.

 

I don't want the stories of your past times,

Or the thoughts of your future life

I want to know your feelings now.

Right now.

Right here.

Every one of them.

Author's Note

Put in your own punctuation poem!! Sorry- punctuation is my extreme weak point. All reviews, nasty or nice welcomed!!

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Yay!!! This is exactly how I feel a lot of the times. Very, very thoughtful. Sometimes you just want to throw the past and the future out the window. It's right now that matters. Right now.

[Dearantlers]

Very well written, and very well done! Thanks for sharing it!

[Cosmic Dreamer]

this is a very thoughtful poem. I love the first stanza, it almost stands by itself as a separate poem, but it needs the rest of the poem to work and give a strong meaning. As always, a poem with a lot of meaning, well done! :)

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nicely said and done.

[rae52]

hmmm i like the idea

forget about it for a month and then come back