Touching Love

This is for a contest, but Im using up my imagination to help me, so help me god!

His gentle eyes, His smiling face,

His lean tall figure, with ever lasting grace,

His kisses sweet and hot on my cheeks

I wish they were on my lips though

Ever since my mother left the earth

He has been so caring

His arms protective

His mind set

His frown wider with every boy he met

I smiled at the thought of him being like that

Always scaring off mean boys with a baseball bat

One night he'd come and kiss me with all his heart

that love I want to know, he carried from the start

He tells me I look like mother

And I caught his heart like a dart

His words melting in my ear

His careness always shows

and my father always knows

How to show his touching love

With every glimpse and every touch

and with every loving word and such

Please goodness dont let this end

I want to be my daddy's girl and friend

I want to be the arms and shoulder to cry on

I want to be his loving campanion

Please god, dont let him go

For if he did, I will kill my self so

But let those mean human beings know

Because most dont understand the meaning of love

And so Im scared this feeling will fly away like a free dove

 

Author's Note

very twisted, but that is what was asked I think, I know its not my kind, I never experienced this, so, probably this is not how I would feel, but...I hope I understood it well

Reviews

[Dominic Rosales]

You did very well on the writing, and I do appreciate this poem because it is very good, and as far as the standards of the contest goes, you are right on track. Congrats on such a great and touching poem.