I care

 I Care

That gathering of minds and hearts, who act differently and think alike

Sharing their darkness and revealing the light

Interesting words as they write

As each one has their story to tell

Some of them wishing to go to hell

I care of these people as if they were my own

flesh and bone and even though none I have known

They Are there when you need to let out all the depression inside

Depressed And Suicidal, anytimeT

 

Took me in for who I am, not how I look and how I sound like

Took me in for my miserable life and how I write it out

Try and think about how life treats you bad or well

And how the surronding seems like hell

If you dread and get those thoughts

Join me and my friends, D.A.S

 

Author's Note

xD I have no idea what I wrote! xD

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

This is so beautiful..I Care,thats what brought me to read this..
the gatherings of minds and hearts,sharing darkness and revealing light,interesting all they write
I care for these people like they are my own,even though none ve I ever known,they are there when you need
Took me in as I am, not for my looks or how I sound,took me with all my misery,that I always write it
like a shelter from a bad life and all the hell that comes with it..join me, be my friend
I was really happy to read this lovely piece..I Care..its like you told my own words
lovely write..

[just a touch of bitters..]

"Sharing their darkness and revealing the light"
That has got to be my favourite line of the entire thing. So powerful!
Accepting people for who they are and not what they look like... Beautiful.
Thank you for the lovely write. :)

[*** Hey Jude***]

Your title brought me to this piece as well. I love the way you have expressed your feelings in such a truly "caring" way. You have shown through this prose the importance of friends that really care as well as showing that the judgment of others is not our right. Glad you shared this different style to your writing, and self. I like this it is honest! ~ Jude :-)

[Pancole's Jelly Bean]

I really love to know you care, hun....it is pure lovely.

[Domo]

Nice poem.
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~D♥m♥~

[deeps]

very intersting write here but beautiful as well.