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Lies

Lies

A Poem by FocusedAmnesia
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20% life, 80% lies.

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From top to bottom,

I'm buried alive; inside,
Completely consumed.
On each side I'm tied,
Weighed down by the pain.
A robot on the outside,
Yet being eaten from within,
My stone-cold mask is applied;
Trying to keep it from crumbling.
I sit here wide-eyed,
A body full of lies.

© 2010 FocusedAmnesia


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Wow!This poem is magnetic! It really speaks to the readers. Bravo my Darling, another amazing piece of work you've created.Congrats! I love how you worded it, very creative. Also the line `i've been lied to from both sides' really speaks in this poem. It also holds great emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"A body full of lies." That just seals it up wonderfully.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Buried alive, eyes wide-open, eaten from within, is there any worse torment? I think not. Lies can really corner us, the more lies we tell, the smaller the way out becomes, until there is nolonger a way out. Very nice portrayal. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with the previous reviews. A wonderful piece with amazing expression and emotion. It gives the reader the feeling of suffocation and despair that lies can cause. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

!00% excellent. Great work, better read.

Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice. 'A robot on the outside
Yet being eaten from within' loved those lines. The description was as good as the poem itself!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!This poem is magnetic! It really speaks to the readers. Bravo my Darling, another amazing piece of work you've created.Congrats! I love how you worded it, very creative. Also the line `i've been lied to from both sides' really speaks in this poem. It also holds great emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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