A Romance in Darkness prt.2

Cant pretend, I smile when im with you

The pains in tune, but just won't heal with wounds

All I give, means much more to you

I could say no, but its not what I would do

Just lay low, any minute I'll be there

The way I feel, you can't find anywhere

 

Kiss me soft, show me that you're here

Clocks tic-toc, the end is drawing near

We're alright, we've got nothing to fear

Seperation, despreration, all within our tears

 

After all we have been through, all the pain ...

you know, that you can count on me

 

I am for you .... and only you

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

This is a sweet piece straight from a tender heart. Thanks for sharing.

alisa ;-)

[TurtleClark]

dude your girlfriend is extremely lucky

[Secret Lullaby]

I really liked this !!

[The Scholar]

How romantic, I like this piece of yours. The flow is good, and the way you add pauses in the lines with commas gives it a steady rhythm.
I especially liked the second stanza--"Clocks tic-toc, the end is drawing near" added some unknown suspense.
And the lines "I am for you .... and only you," again, how romantic.

Wonderful write.