Dreaming

Within the sanctity of my mind I dream,

The goals I have set seem reachable, 

And the path that I walk seems easy,

Yet in reality the path is never simple,

Covered with the debris of failure,

It becomes a common obstacle course,

Forcing me to stumble and trip.

However with our dreams,

The impossible becomes true,

Yet we all have to come back down to earth,

We all have to face the morbid reality,

For what we dream is often a lost cause,

Do not despair however,

For as long as you dream there is hope.

Your dreams are like a spiritual fire,

For it will only burn out if you let it do so,

As long as we can dream we can finally succeed,

For every achievement and every task completed,

We can smile upon ourselves,

And watch as the dream manifests, 

Within the capable hands that build our paths.  

Author's Note

I know this isn't great, but what's really expected of me if I have writers block

Reviews

[MissEpic2902]

I loved this a lot! it spoke volume's on a level that i'm sure a lot of people can relate too! bravo! This is amazing!! :)

[Forgotten]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[MissEpic2902]

Your welcome! it was great!

[Ella]

This isn't great? Well slap me silly, I must not know anything, because I saw an amazing write here ;)
One thing I do suggest:
"And the path that I walk seems easy,
Yet in reality the path is never easy,"
Change the second one to something, I was thinking simply or painless.
Other than that, AMAZING! :D I think you need some self confidence in your writing.

[Forgotten]

Haha thanks, I probably do need a little confidence at the moment, but I do agree that sentence does need to be changed so I shall get right on it

[Ella]

Alright, night goal: give you awesome confidence xD
M'kay! :)

[Forgotten]

Haha :) I'll admit my confidence has been shattered a little due to the fact I haven't been able to write anything recently and I guess it kinda knocked me off balance a little bit

[Ella]

Darling, I haven't been able to write anything for almost a week, and before that a month, I know what it is like.

[Forgotten]

Yeah, it's just one of those things I guess :) I'm sure this will get me back on track again

[Ella]

Hopefully :)