Broken Record

Broken Record

A Poem by Forgotten

You yell at me,
I apologise through the clouded tears,
Each day the same,
My life is a broken record.

My confused words land on innocent ears,
Each one scratching your heart,
Scratching the record,
Each day the same,
Your life trapped in a broken record.

Your soul bleeds,
My arrogance bruises your emotions,
Your free to escape,
Yet you stagger injured looking for hope in this broken record.

© 2012 Forgotten


Author's Note

Forgotten
I hurt the one closet alot, i think the description from here will help you agree, i dont deserve someone that perfect if all i do is hurt :(

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Really sad poem. :/ But very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


that was nice in a poetic way and so sad. Well done and I love how you everything going on as a broken record as it seems sometime. Also that is so true those who hurt the good don't deserve them and its even wronger when you know you're doing it. Anyways well done with the feeling and emotion showing through each word.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was amzing, there is great emotion empowered in your words, And as far as i know everybody deserves to be happy.. Great job and feel better

Posted 12 Years Ago


Negative create bridges with no repair possible. I like the feel and reason for this poem. When someone feel useless and alone. It will create permanent damage. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


broken records can always be fix and there worth keeping one of if their limited edition

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 20, 2011
Last Updated on April 11, 2012
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Forgotten
Forgotten

Gloucestershire, Stroud, United Kingdom



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My real name is John-Paul Crawford, I do voluntary work at Stroud FM and hopefully after my training will be allowed my own slot on air. Writing takes up most of my time, I'm always trying to better m.. more..

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