live life lyrically

To being a simply complicated teenager. :)

pulsing heart/ flowing rain/ laughing loud/ piercing pain/ dance it down/ arc it up/ let it go/ sing it proud/ ••••••• just be yourself/ your kind of unique/ wont be anybody else/ but plain simple me/ <3

Author's Note

The original format had to be modified, so it kind of loses something. V_V Just for kicks and giggles. Please don't be too hard in me, as an amateur poet. ^_^

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Emma, I really do like this. There is poetic form, I don't know how to describe it other than it involves short, potent words that have both action and intense imagery. This is one of them. The format is merely a backdrop to the words, their order, the ebb and flow of the concepts and mood - while knowingly remaining within an arbitrary context of a universe that is acknowledged to be without bounds. It is a pleasure to read and to observe the blossom of your gift unfold.

[AWickedMoon]

Nice little poem. :)

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Thank you! :)

[Bluefire]

It's amazing, I love the way it's written and the rhyme. It's got a nice flow and message to it.
Great write, well done! ^^

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Thanks!! ^_^ Btw... Who's the guy in your profile picture box? He looks like a charming individual. :P

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^
XD oh, he is. His names Envy, he's from the anime Fullmetal Alchemist

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Lol he does look like a crazy person. ^-^;;

[Bluefire]

Lol yeah

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I like it! There is a pulse to it that has it beat with the different moods and feelings. I like that you conclude true to yourself.

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Aww, thank you! (o^-^o)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

:)

[kublakhan27]

This flows perfectly...I love alliteration :D

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Thank you! ^_^

[kublakhan27]

No problem :D

[CYNICALIS]

I like this a lot! It paints a wonderful picture.

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Thank you much. ^_^ I appreciate your time.

[CYNICALIS]

No problem darlin! n,n!

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Btw... I love your picture!!

[CYNICALIS]

Thank you!! ^///^

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I feel like singing this but I'm afraid that the storm might get stronger hehehe...

Nice thoughts and very nice way of presenting them :)

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Aww, fanks! ^///^ I'm glad you liked it! And, by all means, sing away. Give in to my personal music of the night. >;)

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahaha got your umbrella? ;) lol maybe I will maybe I won't >:D

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

*opens up umbrella* BRING IT, 'DERA-KUN!! :D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lol *already raining* I haven't even sang ;D Early warning XD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Lol, so you're definitely not Yama-kun! ;D Or are you? *dun sun duuuuuun* O_o

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

*le gasp* no XD lol o.e maybee i don't know nowwwww DX lol let's ask dera XDXD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Lol if you're Yama-kun, then Dera-kun would be all *jumps you in closet* O_O

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

o.e omg omg Should I hope that I'm Yama-kun? XD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

If you totally love Dera... Then HAIL YEAH YOU SHOULD!!! (If you're a Hibari Junkie... Be a Dino!! ;] Cuz Hibari lurves dat boiiii!)

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

dun love him as muchhhh as Hibari XD lol I could be Dino, clumsy as hell but clumsier if in front of her subordinates XDDDD I read the first link by the way and almost died laughing XD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Right?? XD I love How to Tame a Shrew best of all! :3

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahaha XD it's so awesome with awesome with it XD in the process of reading the other DX prioritizing RRs and catching up with the manga DX

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Yeah, same... Though I kinda got going on a Sherlock Holmes x John Watson kick and now I'm hooked. (o>_

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lol I would ship that pairing... definitely XD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

*fangirl giggles* I wasn't really looking for anything in particular, and this wonderful site pops up. *mops up blood from nosebleed* Heh. ^_^;

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

XDDDDD wonderful things pop up so many times *gives a rug* here it'll help you... I know a tissue'd be useless XDD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

*dries nose* Fanks, darlin. :)

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

XD here's one for future uses *gives rugs* XDD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

*hides rugs in closet* Might need those pretty soon. ^_^; I'm writing Fanfics for a friend's birthday, and I promised they'd be nosebleed-worthy. ^_^;;;;;;

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Your friend is a lucky person *thumbs up* update me if you can *-* I'll bring more rugs XDDD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Lol I'm attempting to write a D Gray-Man one for her... But I can't stand watching the dubs. *_* Do they have the sub versions on YouTube?

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Hmm... I don't think so :/ Try animecrazy or other websites that stream anime~ A lot of videos had been taken down on youtube lately

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

*flips table* I am not happy about that. -_-

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

neither am I D: I really hate it when that happens, most especially when I finally found somebody who uploaded videos with great subs and the next day I can't watch it anymore D:< rawr

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

I know! Dubs are the worst!! I heard Allen Walker in Japanese in a clip a couple days ago and I was like, "Wow, he has such a pretty voice! ^_^" And then I heard him in English and I was like, "What is this bull crap?!? O_o"

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lol yeah O.O and when I hear Japanese it sounds so awesome but when its translated to english I go "WTF?" D: It sounded waaay too corny :/ And then I really hate it when dubs are the only thing available i'd go "where the heck is the manga? =y=" (rather read manga than watch dubs)

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Hell yes. Good manga over a mediocre dub any day! >o

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

manga ftw XDDD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

While I'm thinking about it... Would you like to read a really great Johnlock?? >:D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

OMG YES link please

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Lolz okie dokies!!

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thankies very much XDD

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

You are super welcome! ^_^

[Rhianne Ney]

I read it aloud and it feels like I'm singing it
Wait, can Giotto sing?

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Heck yes!! Giotto is so BA that he can do ANYTHING!!!!! >:D Unlike Dino, who falls apart as soon as his men leave him. ^_^

[Rhianne Ney]

My crush is Dino though... I like his clumsiness

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Hee hee, I love them all... Except for Irie. -_- I loathe that man.

[Rhianne Ney]

He's great...

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Lol gotta love a good manga. ^_^

[Chris]

Form is ever the Author's freedom... and creativity. I noticed "your kind of unique" and that it has a real meaning that fits the poem and person as it stands and wasn't necessarily a typo. Good thoughts, nicely spoken.

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Thank you for reviewing! ^_^