I love You

My heart is bleeding for you.

You are my Passion,

You are my Soul,

You are the Chocolate Chips to my Chocolate Chip Cookies,

Your are the light bulb to my lamp,

you are the apple to my black and cold eyes,

I Love You,

Majestic creamed filled twinkies

Reviews

[sarah]

This is the greatest poem ever, it has totally changed my life! Also my brother is super smart and handsome and would never hack my account when I log in with his laptop.

[Jill Wallflower]

Haha love the twist at the end. It was really good, and the last line just made it better! :)

[evilbro89]

Dude don't listen to Rachelmarie, she obviously isn’t mature enough to comprehend the deeper meaning in your work. But don’t worry I recognize genius when I see it, I think one day if you keep at it your work will be mentioned alongside the greatest minds of this generation!

[DeadbecauseIKilledIt]

I am offended by the term "Silly"

This poem was from the bottom of my ice, cold heart....How could you?

[Rachelmarie]

OH yeah!! I definitely thought this was a silly teenage love poem til the very last line! Way to love the Twinkies.