`Romance and Roses`~Sonnet

` Romance and Roses`

                          

Romance and roses speak a love so sweet
A love which fills mine heart elegantly
and as I'm drawn into thy body heat
willing victim  to your charm completely
Besieged by desires, I taste thy lips
Is it angel, demon? which drives this force?
tracing softly thy face with fingertips
woulds't thou love wish for me to take new course?
The radient glow of moon's magic light
O,Behold!~ silver night stars dance love's song
'Tis a love which fills my heart~ merry blithe
and doth render my soul, to thee belong

Yes,'Tis a Love which fills my happy heart
And Romance and Roses but play their part

 

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Besieged by desires, I taste your lips ~ I love the power you gave this emotional outpouring and the way this maiden portrays her true love for this knight in the line
~ Tis a love which fills my happy heart
And Romance and Roses but play their part ~

This is beautifully penned, good luck and keep em' coming

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Romance and Roses' Sonnet
Fran Marie,
We 'can all identify with Roses being a big part of love's joy so the title is so good! King James English is beautiful too and I like your word choice descriptions. Here is one which caught my eye:
'Tis a love which fills my heart-merry blithe
and doth render my soul, to thee belong'
Love does desire to give itself away and for the good. Descriptive and just plain sweet!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Kathy..ever so much for your kind review..I so appreciate your words;

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful love the old style and pic
Thanks for your entry

[Robin]

lovely words dressed for their role ~

[EmpressPoetess]

A beautiful love sonnet, Fran! You make the reader feel the passion here through your words! Great job!

[An owl on the moon]

Revisited because of your stunning imagery here! Your words flow with an elegance rarely seen, and move us into the depth of love so full of joy and pleasure... What a beautiful work of art you have written...

[Helena]

"Romance and roses speak a love so sweet
A love which fills mine heart elegantly
and as I'm drawn into thy body heat"

Well that did it for me, I just had to find out what happened next! I wasn't disappointed, never am with your brilliant poems Fran! Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous! Thanks for "Keeping the Dream Alive" with my Valentine's contest!

Helena

[Jenny Nelson]

So beautiful! An excellent job with this. I love the style in which you wrote it. It really adds to your words.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very beautiful piece and I think this could easily challenge Shakespeare... overall a very impressive sonnet ..flows together nicely...