Flame

Flame

A Poem by Fran Marie
"

love

"

 

 Like a moth to a flame

 

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 in a moment I feel

 

 intense heat

 

your mystique of magic works

its spell on me

 

rendering me incapable  of

denying your charm

 

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat

 

little strength have I

to escape this trance

 

this magnetic force consumes

my total measure

 

and holds me captive

giving my all to you

 

willingly my heart takes love's chance

wrapped in your arms keeps me pleasantly tamed

 

no need to second guess love's pleasures

nor need for alarm

 

I'm spellbound by this flame

caught in lovelight's treasure

 

         in ectasy where I belong.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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It's like you went inside my head and put my inner thoughts on paper! Someone makes me feel this way and there are several lines throughout your poem confirming this..
."your mystique of magic works it's spell on me / rendering me incapable of denying your charm / little strength have I to escape this trance / Willingly my heart takes love's chance"
What can I say, I adore the whole thing! This is an incredible poem about love and attraction.



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This is pure beauty ... i actually am lost for words what a beautiful piece of work x

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully put...nothing like the flame!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A mesmerizing write of love with enchantment written all over it!
It is quite captivating, and the format you have used is really nice!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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nice...it has a really good flow

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Oh my goodness...one of the best poems i've read!! I love how you put the seperations in the writing...it makes it myseterious in a way. GREAT JOB!!

Thanks for entering!

~Phoenix~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is truly a mistic and amazing poem about the "flame of love", great poem :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the sweet, intriguing mystique of love





Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat...the very essence of surrender, all I can say is that every word is felt on the pulse!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well Done My Friend VERY Well Done!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ilov he dark flavor of ths oe.
Ver nice.

Dave

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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