Spring Fever

Spring Fever

A Poem by Fran Marie
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A Collaberation Write by Fran Marie and A.J Smith

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"Spring Fever"

Strolling down this country lane with you I feel alive
while crispness of February still stirs the air
in my heart spring fever has arrived
knowing you're now with me dear

Hand-in-hand, we savor hints of the coming spring
and that familiar longing tugs at my heart
I, not knowing what tomorrow will bring
cherish this day we’re not apart

The rustic beauty of this place 'tis enchantment to behold
as we kiss beneath the sycamore tree
it trips my senses and sets spring's fire to my soul
making me feel complete and free

Our lips meet, tenderly at first, but grow more urgent
spring’s promise rekindles our flames
our passions re-ignited, our desires re-emergent
as we embrace on this country lane

A taste of spring fever arouses feeling deep inside
as you make smooth moves in grand style
it piques a curiosity which I cannot deny
each charming gesture making me smile

I want to slow dance with you, holding you fast
on this lane, ‘neath this grand old tree
your eyes assure me this moment will last
if only as a sweet springtime memory

As sun sets down another day spent in bliss
and you leave at the break of dawn
I'll hold you close and kiss your sweet lips
'til a new sunrise brings you back into my arms 






 


 

© 2010 Fran Marie


Author's Note

  Fran Marie
Fran's Stanzas are 1,3,5,7,

A.J Sanza's are 2,4,6,

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This piece makes me long for spring, and those romantic spring walks.............delicious piece, full of hope and love.

I want to slow dance with you, holding you fast
on this lane, 'neath this grand old tree
your eyes assure me this moment will last
if only as a sweet springtime memory

Beautiful and enchanting!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Yes, yes, Yes! I'll have what she's having only make mine a lady!
Oh the magic of spring is just around the corner and all seem to want to welcome her, to welcome Persphone the goddess of springink this is a wonderful "Wake up People" Poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Congratulations for winning the collaborative contest! Writing with Nancy Shrader was fun for me!

Sal

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hats off to you both. Great Read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful piece that the two of you came up with - fantastic write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful.. a great collaboration .. love the entire poem.. loved the same verse Lydia did.

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great collaboration you two. Wonderfully and beautifully written, so romantic and lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this piece, it is so romantic and sweet. Beautifully penned, great collaboration.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nice collaboration, Fran. You've captured the promise of spring quite eloquently.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful... "springs promise rekindles our flames".. i like that. Very nice. Murph

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I can give this no higher compliment than to say that I would have been proud to write this .... beautiful ....

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 8, 2008
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Fran Marie

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