Broken Tape

Senyru

can't rewind your life
like old black and white movies
once you add drama

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh...so much drama locked into this one :) We all face drama from time to time - that's life, though there is a category of person who tends to cause their own drama - on top of what life might send their way. Hard to point that out though...:)

Great poetry.

[Fran Marie]

So true.
.thanks so vey much for reviewing my poetry

[Relic]

Wouldn't it be nice if we could rewind our live's and fix all the parts that went wrong?

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Relic..I so appreciate.

[Chris Shaw]

I enjoyed this little seyru, it's so clever and true.

Thank you

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris..so very much appreciated

[Dusted Armor]

Short and simple,sounds like Haiku format. Didn't really leap out at me,felt dull to use short lines and stanza"s

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for reading ..yes..it's is a senryu..using the the same format of a haiku

[Dusted Armor]

That;s awesome I myself have never written in senryu. Keep penning

[Fran Marie]

Thanks.. I will..

[Neville]

What a splendid little senryu... nuff said.. but why has this not received more hits... come on folks.... N

[Fran Marie]

Thanks N..I so appreciate your kind comments on my poem;

[Neville]

my sincere pleasure & true...