Just One Kiss

~Just One Kiss ~

 

'Twas just one kiss 'neath a lavender dogwood tree
one spring day in May
She held onto her hat gleefully
As swift breezes thru~ sunlit shadows,came to play

He brought sweet love for his lady fair
She brought her heart for him to share

And tho~time has passed,they now reminisce
How just one kiss, made love last forever
As two souls fused one heart together
A lifetime's treasure from just one kiss

Reviews

[Lanky]

wow, this is well written. I love your style. The words you choose and the images you conjure paint a picture of the perfect spring day. I cant help but remember the very first kiss with the love of my life. Im incredibly impressed! i love this piece!

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering :)

Your words are classic and just reminded me of the Victorian era, apart from your shortening of through.

I feel all loved up now! haha

[Kass]

BEAUTIFUL! This touched my heart in so many ways! Thank you! Good luck!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Tammy]

Sweet write....

[RareRed]

Sweet and simple...I like this

[Tara Jean Olson]

Beautiful. just lovely. if only Love could be so simple=)