What Then

` What Then`

 

What poet would not write of love, sweet love
The sun, and the moon, and the stars above

What beauty would exist without these things
to gladen, enchanting our hearts to sing
What magic wonderment would fill each night
if not for stars blinking starry bright light
What would tease our curious minds to think
if not for a plump moon's bestowing wink
What source would enhance happiness and bliss
without sun's golden-orb's glorious kiss
What rose could grow, void of warm attention
What romance then, without moonlight's passion

What could light up your eyes as stars above
What Then? ~ would poets write, if not of Love

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I feel like this poem is directed at me, an avowed avenger of love poems! *smile* And you put forth a pretty convincing case . . . I almost bought into your load of love la-la aspirations! Then I remembered how real life usually goes! No, all kidding aside, I do feel that this world has gotten to such a dire level of dreariness, maybe I will welcome your convincing argument that we need to romance the beauty of life more & sit around fomenting less! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

just not going to
make a believer
out of you.. am I?
haha..but ain't love
read morejust not going to
make a believer
out of you.. am I?
haha..but ain't love
grand..with all the mush
included..Thank Margie

[Barbara Walker]

Great poem, Fran. Nice rhythm and rhyme

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, so much

[Saddam]

A lovely piece of romance. Love this.

[B.J]

Quite a romantic piece, great imagery

[Wicahpi]

Love is very much worth the write!!

[deeps]

This is so beuatiful and ever so wonderful.

[J.K.P.]

This was a wonderful piece. Thank you for submitting it to my contest. :]

[Orlando Murcia]

This was a beautiful write
your choice of words made this
a twinkling masterpiece of greatness

Excellent job!

I loved it

Orlando M

[Wildfleour]

Just beautiful...thank you for posting here! It is perfect!!!!

:)

[E. M. Murren]

So beautifully expressed. You have a graceful pen. Well said.